A Sunshine Poem by Valentin Busuioc

A Sunshine

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a sunshine
warms your ankle

occasionally blowed by the wind
the linden's flowers cools you up
and you're smiling

I can barely breath
I have a peep at you ironing my shirt
paying attention to every detail
caressing and looking it dearly

like you are ironing it on me

Saturday, November 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sunshine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 06 June 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Valentin.

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Rajnish Manga 10 November 2018

Reflection of perfect love on both sides without uttering a single word. Thanks for sharing.

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Solomon Senxer 10 November 2018

Yea, I like the way how you begin and end.... a sunshine warms your ankle like.... ironing it on me Great!

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