A Sweet Surrender Poem by Felicity Slaughter

A Sweet Surrender

Rating: 4.5


A kiss.
Just one.
That's all it took
to make me float on air.
It was the lightest
touch, I could barely feel it,
but it was still a sweet surrender.

A kiss.
Just one.
That's all it took for
me to fall apart, to
crumple to pieces, to
melt to a mere puddle in
the grass.

A kiss.
Just one.
That's all it took for
me to shoot up into the sky
like a firework and explode into
a swirl of sparks and all the
colors of an artist's palette.

You kissed me.
Just once.
That's all it took.
I know you feel it too.
That one kiss made me
fall in love with you.

Friday, July 16, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: first love,kiss,love,romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Honeytip 01 October 2012

This is just gorgeous writing. You have beautiful and obvious talent [3

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Asif Andalib 30 September 2012

The first sweet kiss of a lover. A lovely write. My favorite lines are A kiss. Just one. That's all it took for me to shoot up into the sky like a firework and explode into a swirl of sparks and all the colors of a artist's pallette.

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Felicity Slaughter

Felicity Slaughter

New Port Richey, Florida
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