The sun shone as bright as heaven
The splintering wood gave off a dry dusty smell
All around a rainbow of flowers happily soaked up the light
Opening them selves up to the sky
Reaching for the sun
A puffy soft bumblebee grumbled like a coffee grinder
Sucking the sweet pollen from the giving flowers
A couple spider web clouds
Danced teasingly around the sun
But didn’t dare block its light
A color wonderful butterfly skipped through the air
Pausing only momentarily
To land on a bright little daisy
As white as snow
The air vibrated and hummed with cicadas
A huge bald eagle
With sparkling diamonds as eyes
Swooped down close to the flowers
Its wings as long as a baseball bat
Gently brushed the petals of a huge yellow sunflower
The glittering stream whispered
Adding to the symphony of nature.
This is good, Annie, you are off to a good start. I started writing when I was 12 too-you're writing will improve the more you expose yourself to new styles. Don't fret, write what feels right to you and don't try too hard to impress others-eventually you will develop your own unique style that you can shape and perfect.
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I would like to translate this poem
nice........... some beautiful imagery.......... keep writing and be yourself Athena *** words will change the world ***