A Symphony Poem by Annie Janine

A Symphony

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The sun shone as bright as heaven

The splintering wood gave off a dry dusty smell

All around a rainbow of flowers happily soaked up the light

Opening them selves up to the sky

Reaching for the sun

A puffy soft bumblebee grumbled like a coffee grinder

Sucking the sweet pollen from the giving flowers

A couple spider web clouds

Danced teasingly around the sun

But didn’t dare block its light

A color wonderful butterfly skipped through the air

Pausing only momentarily

To land on a bright little daisy

As white as snow

The air vibrated and hummed with cicadas

A huge bald eagle

With sparkling diamonds as eyes

Swooped down close to the flowers

Its wings as long as a baseball bat

Gently brushed the petals of a huge yellow sunflower

The glittering stream whispered

Adding to the symphony of nature.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 21 December 2008

nice........... some beautiful imagery.......... keep writing and be yourself Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Chelsea Brink 13 December 2008

This is good, Annie, you are off to a good start. I started writing when I was 12 too-you're writing will improve the more you expose yourself to new styles. Don't fret, write what feels right to you and don't try too hard to impress others-eventually you will develop your own unique style that you can shape and perfect.

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Annie Janine

Annie Janine

Brooklyn, New York
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