Alone Poem by Annie Janine

Alone

Rating: 4.8
 


My life
a pathetic existence
friends?
backstabbing

The pain of the betrayed
ringing in my ears
to talk when

no one listens
and
no one cares

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 May 2008

feeling alone and isolated is a pain in the neck........i can feel it too....keep moving elmo.

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Aden orie 04 May 2008

i think everyone feels like that at some point, good way of using your skills you will go far, , , keep it up!

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Broken Peaces 06 May 2008

These so called friends are not true friends just aquantancies and hold no significance in true life ignore them you have a bright mind and lots to look forward to 10 chris

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Lacey Unknown 14 May 2008

This poem was written incredibly well. You captured so much emotion into so few lines. However, I'd like to tell you that you are never alone. God is with you all the time and can turn your life around. ~Lacey~

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River Someday 20 May 2008

this is an amazing poem and you wrote it very well. I know this feeling.

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John Smith 23 January 2009

Depressing, and hopeless, Annie, but fantastically powerful!

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Emily Oldham 21 December 2008

yeah, i can relate........... life is really hard when you're 12........... thanks

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Alison Cassidy 18 November 2008

You express your 14 year old angst with a nice poetic touch. I remember the pain of adolescence. Your poem reminds me very vividly. You have talent. Keep writing. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ashley Hart 18 November 2008

must be tough what your going through. way to share your emotions.

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Annie Girl 16 November 2008

i know how that is.... nice poem i like it

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