My life
a pathetic existence
friends?
backstabbing
The pain of the betrayed
ringing in my ears
to talk when
no one listens
and
no one cares
i think everyone feels like that at some point, good way of using your skills you will go far, , , keep it up!
These so called friends are not true friends just aquantancies and hold no significance in true life ignore them you have a bright mind and lots to look forward to 10 chris
This poem was written incredibly well. You captured so much emotion into so few lines. However, I'd like to tell you that you are never alone. God is with you all the time and can turn your life around. ~Lacey~
this is an amazing poem and you wrote it very well. I know this feeling.
yeah, i can relate........... life is really hard when you're 12........... thanks
You express your 14 year old angst with a nice poetic touch. I remember the pain of adolescence. Your poem reminds me very vividly. You have talent. Keep writing. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
must be tough what your going through. way to share your emotions.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
feeling alone and isolated is a pain in the neck........i can feel it too....keep moving elmo.