Wednesday, October 1, 2008

***a Teardropp Falls*** Comments

Rating: 2.8

The memories of missing years
Has squinting eyes flooding with tears
A teardropp falls
The start of it all
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Kaspa Richards
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Anna jonson 05 October 2008

a beautiful poem with a beautiful composition good piece.......i like it

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Tai Chi Italy 01 October 2008

Beautiful work Kaspa, you seem to know her well....it is a beautiful expression of the power of the inner she or he, we got to keep in touch. Smiling at you, Tai

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Silence Dogood 01 October 2008

I like how you repeat the lines A teardropp falls at the end of each stanza a beautiful peice

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Kaspa Richards

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