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ya know what i wanted with this tho, Nim? i wanted a fiercer ending. abandonment does say much. with the butterflies-turned-hornets. but maybe tie it back to the pond. Susx

'somebody's love is floating on an isolated pond' the metamorphosis you described here - tragic & true.

Quite a contrast in images here from butterflies to hornets and all in the space of a few concise lines. It is to be hoped that these two people, whoever they are, will choose to return to their first estate. Fascinating poem, Nimal. Regards, Sandra