A Unique Relationship. Poem by Hardik Vaidya

A Unique Relationship.



A unique relationship.

Son + Father.
Y to Y.
Fathers in series,
To sons down the trees.
We talk less.
We write rare.
We are in touch.
Silences.
A tear there,
A tear here.
Two drops make an ocean.

A poem by Hardik Mahesh Vaidya.

Thursday, November 14, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: fathers,ocean,relationship,sons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 23 March 2014

Very touching poem Hardik. Having two sons of my own, this poem strikes home. 'We are in touch. Silences. A tear there, a tear here, two drops make an ocean'. At times fathers are in touch, but don't communicate heart to heart the way their sons wish they would. A sense of sadness filters through this poem Hardik, you've touched my heart with the two drops of tears. Appreciate this thoughtful poem. RoseAnn

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Mahuva, Gujarat, India.
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