Blue Dragonfly

A Very Refreshing Breeze - Poem by Blue Dragonfly

As I walked by the lake in the wee hours before the break of day
I thought about nothing at all but just absorbed the freshness that
came my way
The freshness wash's away all that dulls the gleam of life
It comes in abundance to help wipe clean the darkness of strife
It awakens the spirit and sets the course anew
No blame of others or pity pot stew
Walking so briskly and enjoying new waters so calm and serene
Wheather they be an unchartered universe or a prarie so pristine
So join me if you like and breathe in fresh clean air
Wherever we go it will be marvelous there

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Comments about A Very Refreshing Breeze by Blue Dragonfly

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/20/2015 5:14:00 AM)

    Freshness! With the muse of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Sharad Juneja (4/21/2012 11:08:00 PM)

    Very refrshing indeed...a small advice i want to give ...shorten n make ur sentences crisp...even i used to do the same... now i have improved a bit (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 17, 2012

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