Gangadharan nair Pulingat..

A Visualizing Theme. - Poem by Gangadharan nair Pulingat..

Visualize the passage of time
Where the rays of light becomes dim
The ways feels so difficult to pass
In distance there sees a light beam
Seeking the visibility, I walks more
Expecting a good vision there
The vision of awareness that I feel
May be a long distance, still try my best
The life here I enjoy, every moment there to.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A positive journey of life.....

Comments about A Visualizing Theme. by Gangadharan nair Pulingat..

  • (9/18/2015 11:32:00 PM)

    I walks more; the ways feels. Is this some form of English I`m not aware of? I thought we would say I walk more; the ways feel to agree with the number whether singular or plural and the subject in the verb.

    Well, enough with that part. the poem has its moments though not a entire good poem. It could be better much, but i think you gave it a good effort talking of time as the main subject.

    Keep writing and improving.


    Luis Estable
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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 18, 2015

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