A Warm Red Hunger Poem by David Kowalczyk

A Warm Red Hunger

Rating: 2.9


Last night, I dreamt of her
for the first time in over
five years.
Her twilight face appeared,
a face which could neither love me
nor let me go.
The face she wore while
our love slowly withered.

That face grew fainter, and
soon her sunrise face appeared:
joyous, kind, and believing.
The face I first met,
the face I will carry
to my grave.
Last night,
a dormant volcano
in Mexico erupted.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Bell 13 December 2008

Sophmoric tripe, at best. How very disappointing, especially in light of the other poems in this collection.

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Mark Mywords 04 January 2008

Puke. Your attempts at 'romantic' poems seem to border on juvenalia.

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David Kowalczyk

David Kowalczyk

Batavia, New York
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