A Wild Thing. Poem by Fay Slimm

A Wild Thing.

Rating: 5.0


The boisterous sheet of morning-fresh water
Tumbled, discharging explosive noise down
Into a torrent of rainbowing, caught
From the top of a towering black-crowned
Cliff, splintering light all around, until
Its' implosion quelled further sound, breaking
Surface with frothy rumpus on the still
Limpid calm of flat-plate sun-filtered lake
Alongside which, from bullrushy reeds swam
The Vision - head high and gliding, he
Silently paced, hastily dipped, then began
A random, wild-eyed, free-diving spree,
Slipping occasional glances at me.

Only for moments this show of Otter
Elation. - Soon distanced to a mere blot
On shimmering water, but I never forgot
The Otter, me, and such wild joy we begot.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Martin Swords 29 November 2008

Fay.... lovely memory of a wild encounter. Funny the things that stay with you, real things....yoyr 'Daffodil' moment....... thank you Martin

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Chuck Petz 18 November 2008

A charming story about natures hooligans.

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Tom Balch 16 November 2008

Nothing like wildlife close up to get the pen working,10+ Tom

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Tia Maria 15 November 2008

ahhh wonderful scenario you created here - I had an amazing encounter with a resident otter by a lake in the foothills of the mountains - we played for a few minutes & it was magical - they are so silky soft :) happy thoughts, luv T

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Kris Smith 15 November 2008

Beautifully written my friend one of my favourite creatures thanks Fay ageless your words are Chris 10

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