A Wish Poem by Rishik DuttaGupta

A Wish

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Savita tyagi, the muse,
inspire my thoughts, and bless
your words to my pen.


I wish I were a poet,
Not like any other,
In the long list of wishes may be another addition,
My pen, like a key to a piano,
When touched in a spring noon,
Would break my monotony.
The languid humming of a cuckoo,
Would mellow in its sweet words.
The senses esoteric,
would gain life in my words.
I do smile, when alone,
At my thoughts, at my naivety.
But I do have a right to dream;
They say poets are dreamers,
So am I a poet, or
Am I asleep.
The impotency of my ink does
grasp my soul,
Do I hear my soul whimper?
The mundane thoughts, the dull desires,
The paralysed thoughts,
Are suitors to my incapacity
To sit quiet and still.
I wish I were a poet.

Monday, February 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,frustration,imagination,loneliness,soul,thought,wish
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by A Piano by Savita Tyagi
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 30 May 2016

Go on writing, my dear son, go on..

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Somali K Chakrabarti 17 February 2016

Beautifully worded. Liked the comparison of pen with piano.

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Rishik Duttagupta 17 February 2016

thank you very much

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Savita Tyagi 15 February 2016

Thank you so much Rishik. I liked it the way you have shaped it for your wish. Glad that my poem could be an inspiration to you. I myself have been inspired many times by what I read. But inspiration is all around us and what you see and hear would be shaped in your mind for your pen to give it a unique voice. A Voice of your own. It reflects in this poem and it will reflect in more of your poems too as you keep on writing. Thank you for sharing it.

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Rishik Duttagupta 15 February 2016

Thank you for your feedback

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Gajanan Mishra 15 February 2016

I wish I were a poet, beautiful.. thanks.. go on..

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Rishik Duttagupta 15 February 2016

thank you so much...

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