Tuesday, January 23, 2018

A Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

A day has not passed without wishing
That our lives would be the way we dreamt.
We always desired to be the best
In every way we could imagine
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Hanley Sarvesh
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2018

We rose up from those times As a night fades out when sun shines But it left us with an experience Which only made us stronger.....lovely expression! A beautiful poem....It's a pleasure reading it again!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2018

I wish to be a river, that flows Who can touch every soul Who Can live with a joy of giving Glitter at night to show the path....Wonderful poetic imagination! it's a beautiful poem and you have appended an excellent picture as well! Thanks for sharing! You may like to read my poem Ode to My Conscience..Thank you

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Hanley Sarvesh 23 January 2018

Thank you Sir, your review means a lot to me. I will surely read your poem.

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 23 January 2018

I wish to be a river, that flows Who can touch every soul This feeling will let me grow Then willing to let my spirit go to a place unknown BRAVO this is a small verse poem! ! i vote 10++++++++

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Hanley Sarvesh 23 January 2018

Thank you Ma'am

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