A Woman With Red Shoes Poem by amisha patel

A Woman With Red Shoes

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She walked with her envious tract of feeling,
Look upon the pink sky that she dreamt with herself.
All alone left her into that deep sigh of guilt,
To put her life a conundrum of pool.
Opened the box of Pandora that her step-mom gifted her once,
With one set of red shoes that she hated the most,
With the will to throw the farthest she could.
Her constant screaming ' why this hell happened to me only? ',
Could only severe her ties with herself.
She chose not to look upon the water in which she has been immersed for soo long,
To not return to see that pink sky anymore.
Her greatest fear clinged her to be a monkfish,
All alone crying for help,
And taking short breath to pump her surviving.
She said to herself 'Is it that much hard to come over the water when I am shrinking inside it? ',
Fixed her hairs. Up her collar,
She took the last breath of regret,
Before taking the claim of her red shoes.

Tuesday, October 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: perception,thought
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 November 2020

Really a poignant story written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2020

You are so nice and skillful at telling stories..Please keep telling thus. All 5 stars for your creativity. To my favourites...

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Amisha Patel 10 November 2020

Thankyou so much for such positive note

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 November 2020

Write comment. Such a nice start, Amisha. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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