Tuesday, October 20, 2020

A Woman With Red Shoes Comments

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She walked with her envious tract of feeling,
Look upon the pink sky that she dreamt with herself.
All alone left her into that deep sigh of guilt,
To put her life a conundrum of pool.
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amisha patel
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Chinedu Dike 11 November 2020

Really a poignant story written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2020

You are so nice and skillful at telling stories..Please keep telling thus. All 5 stars for your creativity. To my favourites...

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Amisha Patel 10 November 2020

Thankyou so much for such positive note

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 November 2020

Write comment. Such a nice start, Amisha. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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