A Womans Happiness Poem by joe foster

A Womans Happiness



Such sexy wishes a women can have
she takes your mood with her, as you follow behind,
such a beautiful feeling,
a feeling inside.
such sexy wishes, these wishes you seek.

as you walk through the woods
your eyes wide open,
looking for a wish,
you have no clue,
her heart is with you.

your almost home..
look at that beautiful flower
such a smiling face
as she puts them in her vase,

this you see was meant for me,
when the wish is met
the mood is reset,
and you start over,

not a simple task,
its worth it,
because you love her

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I found this the other day. I wrote it a few years ago. I didn't know what to name it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ally Gunther 10 May 2012

I've read a few of your poems- I think they're really good, something you may want to work on is a more abstract way to show these feelings- metaphors etc...dw I need to work on it too :)

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