A World Without You Poem by Mon Fur

A World Without You

Rating: 4.8


A world without you,
Is a world without light,
A world without hope,
A world without sight.

A world without you,
Is a world of living hell,
A world where life won't matter,
A world I wouldn't care to dwell.

A world without you,
Is a world full of terror,
A world lacking you,
Would be its biggest error.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lux Lator 04 November 2012

why did all my comments disappear? ! ? ! Anyways, I think that all the poems you write are based on your life. if they do, then your life must be a roller coaster, with the twists and turns. Please continue to write happy poems, you are my inspiration.

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Lux Lator 04 November 2012

some how I have the feeling that the poems you write is based on your life. if they do, your life must be a roller coaster, with all the twists and turns. I hope you have a wonderful life. You are a good poet, and my inspiration. All great poets are my inspirations. Please continue to write poems!

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Maureen Furigay 03 March 2012

I like it you rock! you have nice rhyming words LOVE IT!

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