Friday The 13th Poem by Mon Fur

Friday The 13th

Rating: 5.0


My heart’s beating hard
about to burst
I’m dizzy from
thinking about the worst

I’m so scared
I’m so excited
I’m very worried
there’s no need to deny it

Could she be joking
Is she going to tell him
What would he say
How can I finish this poem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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