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A Young Age Cry

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I start my day with a cry,
thinking about her all the time.
I have all regards for her,
hope one day she will be mine.

What can I do if there is a communication gap,
she lives far away in some outer zone.
she never even tried to reply me back,
whenever I messaged or called her by phone.

It is true that the love is blind,
that tears you from inside and also even grind.
You forget everything from where does she belong,
or what does she do or relation would long.

love is also fearless that is also right,
it is an immortal drink that makes you delight.
It can give you pain if there is any pore,
it can even kill you it is that much sour.

Keeping all these things in my mind,
I never fall in love ever before.
Right now I am in love which is true,
but she has already closed her door.

Oh God give me some strength or a better way,
I cant bear it any more, oh god I pray.
I will love her till my last breath,
I will love her everyday.
Friday, March 2, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My Very First love poem
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COMMENTS
James Mclain 18 August 2015
Welcome friend, as you grow older you will find that love when not blind, really is.. iip
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Sankaran Ayya 14 April 2012
Very good poem nice interesting though sad -KAVIN CHARALAN
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Neela Nath Das 13 April 2012
It's a cry of unrequited love.Nice one!
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nice lines, once I started reading, i couldn't think of anything else till it ended.i love the rhymes. one thing, i don't actually understand love poems in the best way, but i can tell this one is good.
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nice lines, once i started reading, i couldn't think of anything else, the poem in itself is intriguing, and i love the rhymes. good poem.
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Bimal Koul 10 April 2012
good..all the best....keep writing more
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