Steven Federle

Freshman - 605 Points (1951 / Cincinnati Ohio)

Abaude: Morning Rain - Poem by Steven Federle

Living trees, grass rising
from dark cool soil

Roses, like blood from a wound
rise above a common weed.

Its fugitive life persists
evading my brutal hands.

November rains
provoke darker green

Dim clouds pour
solemn waterfalls

Holy tears renew
the life of our dark world.

Comments about Abaude: Morning Rain by Steven Federle

  • (5/11/2011 10:46:00 AM)

    Beautiful.Try 'Shower' it's the flip side of yours. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/11/2011 10:44:00 AM)

    Beautiful. Try my 'Shower'.It's the flip side of your piece. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 30, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 11, 2011

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