Steven Federle

Freshman - 605 Points (1951 / Cincinnati Ohio)

In Arching Waters - Poem by Steven Federle

In arching waters
the black bird dances
with graceless step,
head jerks, probing soft soil,
penetrating wet grass
when rearing back primitive eyes
it raises ivory beak
and offers a shining prize,
living, writhing.
captive
to mother-sky.


Comments about In Arching Waters by Steven Federle

  • (5/2/2011 9:28:00 PM)


    Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery.
    Great stuff.
    A perfect...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
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  • (5/2/2011 9:27:00 PM)


    Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery.
    Great stuff.
    A perfect...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 2, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 3, 2011


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