Tuesday, October 31, 2006

Abortion (The Words Of An Unborn Child) Comments

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Tiny heart Tiny beat..
The Paddling of two tiny feet.
Smile stretching far and wide..
Its the beginning of a little child
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Orlando Edwin
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Miss tee 26 June 2010

this brought me to tears. i agree with lucianne fasolo - its so easy to condemn abortion but ultimately so many factors play into making this kind of decision that one has no right to judge those who make this choice.

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Indira Renganathan 15 September 2009

You have made me cry dear poet....I have no words to comment for my heart is blocked with tears....God bless

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Kristen Elyse 25 February 2008

this is an incredible poem. im so glad you were able to capture it in a way that shows how wrong it is...how the babys do have feeling. thankyou

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Lucianne Fasolo 24 October 2007

These words do sound cruel... because abortion at seven months of pregnancy is trully murder. Even so, I still think that abandoning a child (giving up for adoption, leaving it, you choose how to call it) is a much bigger crime than interrupting pregnancy in the earliest stage (which I don't believe is a crime) . Life is sacred, David said before me; if it's sacred why are there so many orphan children in the world? Where are the words of every unwanted, abandoned child? It's easy to condemn abortion. It's much harder to consider how an abandoned child feels, and how they turn out to be when they grow up.

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David Tanguay 31 October 2006

These words do sound cruel, but there is no justification for murder. Perhaps one would reconsider after reading this little story. Life is sacred even to those who don't believe in God.

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