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Absolution

Rating: 2.6

Absolution
I need to feel it
I need to wash
My sins away.

I'm always sinning,
It is my nature
I cannot see
Through this daze.

I cannot live
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Sandra Osborne 18 March 2005

Thank you Janice. I think it's immature kids roaming around. This poem was slammed back during the Paul thing, It is hard to soldier on, I haven't been writing anything new, I am glad you're back. :)

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Janice M Pickett 17 March 2005

Sorry spelling slip..Site....

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Janice M Pickett 17 March 2005

Yes the one's are still rolling in... Maybe I made the mistake of thinking this siste was a good place to experience sincere and genuine poetry critics. Maybe it is not as a good as I thought. You deserve the 10's girl. Hugs Jan

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Sandra Osborne 08 March 2005

Ahhh the (1) boy or girl again. Took that score right down from 10 Well, I must say what an honor That it is to have this garner The same vote as AJS. Thank you, oh, thank you, yes. No, really, an honor. Thank You SO much.

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