Abused Cinderella Poem by Bella Ravenstar

Abused Cinderella

Rating: 3.9


Cinderella was a nice gal
Always did what she was told
Put others before herself
Cinderella had lots of hopes and dreams
One day in the town she heard of the ball
CInderella wanted to go
Really really bad
Her step mom gave her touble
Her sisters were ok
But she never went
Beucase no one cared
Poor cinderella cried
Dreams really don't come true
Fairytales are fake
Cinderella never found her prince
She never really went to any ball
She lost all her hopes and dreams in life
Cinderella never got a granted wish
Poor cinderella
True love never found her
When she was old
Cinderella died an old maid
When Cinderella went to heaven
She was treated like a real princess
Angels planed a ball for her
And made her a pretty white gown
Jesus danced with her
Then he took her by the hand
And led her to her handsome chosen prince
It was all worth the shattered hopes
And dreams in life
To have a fairytale ending in heaven

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marie Martin 11 April 2009

WOW, i think that that is all i can say...and thats a good thing trust me!

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Ali Riza 13 October 2008

well..... it is sort of nice. well keep up the gud work Mrs ravenstar

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Kayla Joubert 19 October 2012

Much much better than the original! !

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Kasey Jessie 08 May 2014

could this be made into a movie instead perhaps?

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Mysterious Writer 333 14 May 2016

This poem explains what will truly happen to any girl who lived like Cinderella for Fairy God Mothers don't exist and won't be there in times of help. Truly beautiful. I loved how you made it happy at the end.

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Bernard Snyder 24 July 2015

This sounds very much like a movie I would pay to see. Nicely penned with a deep imagination!

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Vada Thomas 24 July 2015

Well penned. Dreams can be realized in another realm. Thanks for sharing, Perhaps you may enjoy some of my poems. Many blessings, Keep writing, Vada Thomas

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Jasbir Chatterjee 24 July 2015

lovely poem; the story about Cinderella has been my favorite story since childhood.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 07 December 2014

Highly imaginative and realistic poem and it is wonderfully good in all respects.

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