Active Vs. Passive Poem by Francie Lynch

Active Vs. Passive



When you write
Your next verse,
The active voice
Is a better choice.
The passive voice
Isn't as terse,
Your readers get lost,
They may curse,
Or worse,
Disperse.
Will I...
Should I...
Could I..
Might I...
Start a line that might lie,
Start a line that might die.
Can I...
May I...
Would I...
Do I...
Start a line sounding sly,
Start a line that won't fly.
Be pro-choice
With the active voice.
Be the action,
Not receiver,
We'll be believers,
And you'll
Be briefer.

Sunday, January 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: action,believe,love,poem,poet,poetic expression,readers,slang,style,voice
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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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