The Flight Ahead Of Me Poem by Francie Lynch

The Flight Ahead Of Me

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The ravens survey
The gated community,
Scouring for a meal.
They swoop low,
Caw and crow,
Conversing in harmony.
The repast dead
Are safely laid
Beneath their carrion beaks;
I, in grief
Shoo them off
Your bronzed memory:
Then I pause
To recall
The flight ahead of me.

Wednesday, April 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death,grief
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 October 2018

Then I pause To recall The flight ahead of me. grief expressed in a great way in an original tone .. thank u dear poet. congratulations that one of your poems is made POD. thank u. tony

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Great imagery my friend!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2015

Beneath their carrion beaks; I, in grief...wonderful really. Nicely presented and shared.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2015

Beneath their carrion beaks; ....Very wonderful poem shared really. Very nice job done.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2015

Conversing in melody. Wonderful imagery and very nice poem shared really. nice JOB DONE AND SHARED.

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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