Weldon Davis

Silver Star - 3,969 Points (8-16-80 / Fayetteville NC USA)

Adam - Poem by Weldon Davis

I have an envy of Adam
I'd give my rib for an Eve
In the garden of Eden
With a god to believe

Food in abundance
Teach my sons to love
Make this world better
Prevent the flood

Let everyone have their share
Of trust and care
Do my own work
Treat the world fair

Respect what I got
Which is not a lot
Still I have them
In this world gone foul

I have an envy of Adam

Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams, peace


Comments about Adam by Weldon Davis

  • Kim Barney (1/22/2016 11:25:00 AM)


    Fascinating poem. I think you might enjoy my poem 'What really happened in the Garden of Eden'.
    Please read it and see what you think. Thanks.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/22/2016 11:13:00 AM)


    Let everyone have their share
    Of trust and care..This is definitely very fantastic work shared with wise vision. Nicely penned poem definitely.10
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 22, 2016



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