Sunday, August 21, 2016

Addiction! I Want To Be Free Comments

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There is an addiction in my soul
There stands a torment in my role
An addiction of uncertainty
A torment of certainty.
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Charles. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Diane Montemayor 22 August 2016

Dear Sir Charles, You want to be free, , , forget and forgive yourself....rebuild your strength, , we are born to make a better world, , , sincerely, diane

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 August 2016

You have written a wonderful poem on the tendency to become a slave to one's own self. it is true so many are suffering from such tendencies and do not find a way out of it..... i am so happy that your pen as a poet is revealing such great truths....... thank you.

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Kelly Kurt 21 August 2016

A powerful poem, Charles. Thanks

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