Wednesday, July 19, 2017

Adhuri Khwahish -1 Comments

Rating: 4.0

Is hasrat~e dil ki.....
Kuch kasar reh gyi,
Jo khwahishe thi.....
Wo khwahishe hi reh gyi,
...
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Rv. Parmar
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Parmar. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Rv Parmar 27 August 2017

Thnks sir

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M Asim Nehal 19 July 2017

Bahut khoob...10+++++ Lajab, Maza aagaya padh kar.

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Rv Parmar 19 July 2017

Thnk you sir

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