Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Adieu (Good Bye) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had loved you truly but you never believe,
After your denial the beautiful smile you give,

I tried bring happiness in your life, but without being away it were few,
For your ecstasy I think I have to say adieu...
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Poet Parth 26 September 2012

thank you @Indranil Bhaduri and @Eindaray Kyaw so much for yr appreciation...

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Indranil Bhaduri 26 September 2012

Lovely expressions.....

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Eindaray Kyaw 26 September 2012

Beautifully arranged rhythm is great I can see young love born from your newest heart..through your nice poem Great Job....! !

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