Adjusting This Love Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Adjusting This Love

Rating: 5.0


HERE we are again deliberately
adjusting this love affair, pointing out
the bad spots, brushing the bullshit
aside, grabing that inward thing, and
useing our toothbrushes to clean it up,
but we both know that the beginning
was the end, and the end, a new beginning
with some one eles...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 26 October 2006

Interesting write, David... brutally honest and blunt. Really well done! Brian

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success