Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 422,083 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Admiration - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Admiration
To those
Who love and live
With faith and re-live

Admiration
For those
Who believe in sacrifice?
Stand dedicated with promises

Admiration
To those
Who wants to serve the poor?
With no lip services but actual workers

They may stand all tall
Receive tumultuous call
Respect and honor wherever they go
It is small gesture on our part to flow

Little bit of compassion and love to arrive
For down trodden and deprived
That shall be called real service
You may have life to spend at ease


Comments about Admiration by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 9:52:00 PM)


    aryaindia
    Very thought provoking views and feelings. Tfs
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 9:50:00 PM)


    Awesome


    Antoinette Townsend19 minutes ago
    True words! ! ! Great poet! ! ! Very inspiring! ! !
    Comment +1
    deep
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 9:50:00 PM)


    subtle incantations27 minutes ago
    i like it a lot
    Comment +1
    THIS IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL TRUTH..............
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 9:50:00 PM)


    Delilah Blueness34 minutes ago
    MUCH LOVE TO YOU. KEEP IT UP ANGEL! ! : 0)
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 9:49:00 PM)


    BRUCE RANDALL18 minutes ago
    I believe I understand the message our poet is trying to convey, but I think something is being lost in translation. There are contextual and syntactical errors in proper english that if corrected, in my opinion, will greatly improve this insightful poetic endeavor.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 9:49:00 PM)


    aryaindia
    Very thought provoking views and feelings. Tfs
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 9:03:00 PM)


    Admiration
    To those
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 1, 2012



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