Admire Evil? Poem by Dwayne Banks

Admire Evil?



A ruthless heart, not the way to be
there are no sunrises, there is no glee
No laughs, no smiles; true disdain
every minute, every hour; only pain
Soulful tears, min'ute thoughts
no yes'es, no maybes; only nots
Can you admire the way you are?
your driving, speeding; you'll crash the car
Neglecting the good for your own congruence
in your mind you gain the ultimate influence
The authority you think you command
will leave you standing with an empty hand
The question now is...How do I depart?
quit feeling this emptiness, in my heart
There are some answers, though one stands alone
I often call it 'The No Sin Zone'
To move into, you must first sign the lease
the one in charge, the 'Prince of Peace'
The LORD Almighty, the 'King of Kings'
not the Prince of Darkness, no extravagant rings
Continue Evil, go on about your way
my heart, my soul - Jesus -that's all I'll say


January 23,2011

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 12 March 2012

Simplicity is the style and quality of your poem, the way you start and end the poem is praise worthy, you are really a talented one, your wording and the poetical diction is properly appropriate, the flow of the poem is like a gushing water, and blowing like a wind making a sound soothing to soul and storming the brain, and very musical to ears, I wish I had written this poem….the theme is original and the poem is well crafted and well composed poem those qualities made the poem a everlasting a piece of fine art…I like poem very much and I will also like you thoughtful on my poems, especially ‘’I want to die’’

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