Adrift Poem by TIMOTHY KNIGHT HILL

Adrift

Rating: 2.5


Adrift, I find myself in this vastness of ocean called life My sails are torn. My rudders broken. Once I was a proud vessel. My cannons loaded with shot and powder. My flag flew proudly over many seas and ports. Adrift, No Captain, Lost is the First Mate. The waves crash against me and push me farther out to sea. Adrift I find myself without the love of my crew. Adrift I find myself without the cassolette of you. Adrift, no course to follow.

Friday, July 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Baker 22 August 2017

Beautifully written.... Heart wrenching.. You have your course set, Only He.. He is the captain of your vessel now.. Destiney God..truth, love, Heart..johanna x

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Rachel Butler 19 August 2015

Adrift, a clear tale well told. Pregnant with under current of meanings. You may want to choose a different layout that makes it easier for the reader to read follow. Best RAB

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