Friday, July 14, 2006

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Over my empty shoulders
I want you to sear past my skin
Split my valley with your hair
as I lay on my back
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Cheryl Renaud
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Barbara Terry 15 July 2006

OMG...this is so beautiful and romantic, Cheryl. Strong sexual ecstacy shows through this, as well as pure love. You have written this very well, Cheryl, thanx for sharing. Barbara

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Shogunoka Ledesma III 14 July 2006

OMG...that is a very beautiful poem. Well written with its strong sexual emotions and desire.

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