Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 383,587 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Adverse Comment - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Adverse comments

We celebrated republic day
With fear all the way
It passed off peacefully
The breathe stopped intermittently

What a tragedy for democratic country?
What a pity to feel on particular community?
Terrorists are sent from neighboring nation
We had never good relation

County has gained full confidence
And drawn inference
Country has to be self reliant
And powerful enough to fight

How can we take pride in celebration?
When all the time we fear retaliation
So many were captured while preparing for disruption
They were trying for interruption

We are threatened from within
So many remain in link
They try to weaken the government
And blame the country with adverse comments

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/26/2016 10:44:00 AM)


    We are threatened from within
    So many remain in link
    They try to weaken the government
    And blame the country with adverse comments
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2016



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