Advice Poem by ion untaru

Advice



Fist fight in the wall
and after you heal wounds,
beat again

The walls surrounding the city
in place to protect,
have suffocated a

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 January 2010

umm... is this already finished. The last line is kinda you know....? ..... anyway, whether it's finished or not, you write good!

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Village Finta, Dambovitza
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