ion untaru

Rookie (3 december 1939 / Village Finta, Dambovitza)

Circle - Poem by ion untaru

failure, failure
only remebering you,
I could write a book:
naive, resigned, opportunist
the order of our new order -
beautifull words, beautifull words
poor your victims!
minute after minute
clock after clock,
waiting the last one
all metropol's comfort
for a day and a night
lived in a forrest!
huts, houses, villas,
residences, palaces
the last,
always from four planks...

(translated from romanian)


Comments about Circle by ion untaru

  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2009 6:35:00 PM)

    failure, failure
    only remebering you,
    I could write a book:
    naive, resigned, opportunist
    lie is full circle comprising of failures, success adn we can write anything which is baneficial to the people... beutiful one.. ilike it....10
    read mine all trains stop here.... individual and miss i miss u
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  • Eyan Desir (6/3/2009 6:13:00 AM)

    Interesting write
    IOn
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  • Sameer Ahmed (4/17/2009 4:17:00 AM)

    Building metropolism is a futile exercise. Fondness to
    Matter is human nature but one needs to understand
    the fruitfulness of the circle you have drawn to show
    what exactly the human life is about.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 10, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 1, 2009


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