Aegean Poem by Othman Mohammed

Aegean

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Aegean


I will pass Aegean dont fear
I can see the Island it is near
Tell my mom I'll be ok! !
'Don't do that please stay'.

No way to look back, just hear
Take care of my Son! ! please swear
we will reunite one day
Life will be good I should go this way

" if you drown what will I do'
Don't leave us alone please
I am in a boat now "Stop' ' No'
keep my last words just in a case
Tell my family to not cry! !
this is my will if I die.

Friday, June 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: boat,family,island,refugee,sea,turkey,war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
man talks with his wife while he tries to pass to Europ
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 18 June 2017

Take care of my Son! ! please swear we will reunite one day Life will be good I should go this way imaginig the life of refugees....... you have portrayes the pain and suffering and emotions so well..... may God bless all the refugees........ so fine a poem. i was just moved by it. thank you. tony

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Unwritten Soul 18 June 2017

Keep it up then, bring more theme to your work and sometimes you can get inspired by reading others... you can find these writer as well; Muhammad Ali, M.J lemon, Frank Davis Sr., Susan, Nosheen, Hans VR, sometimes i do get insipired by good work...i know you will bring another flavor in this website but lets warming around the members as well..they are kind :) Have fun Othman!

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Unwritten Soul 16 June 2017

Oh my God, this is so heartbreaking moment and if he dies, i cry....for them. This is one of most beautiful emotional writing of refugees and war i ever read that begging my eyes to tears, i hold it because i hope the man survived and they going to reunite with whole family, and to make his mother feel relief. What i really admire of that man spirit is, he knows that he must make it to give other better life..and life is what he gambled. If this is a real story...Oh Lord, keep them safe, salute to the man of his still heart for future..not himself but others! . Keep it up to write quality poem Othman.

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Othman Mohmmed 17 June 2017

this story happened many times with many peoples thank u for ur words it is very nice of u I will post two more about this situation thank u

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