Afterthought - Inspired By Whole? By Rob Lamberton Comments
If I wallow
And don't swallow
That too big bite
My body hurts
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Richard! Welcome back. You were so badly missed and this verse marks a triumphant return. Not a single one of your words is ever released in vain...to simply wallow. Such a fantastic verse.
M.J., you always make my day! Thanks so much for the welcome back! And for such very kind words and very positive constructive criticism!
M.J., thanks so very much for having added my poem to your favourites!
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12/23/2025 12:58:38 AM # 1.0.0
Im going to have to read Robs work for the inspiration, but I have to sat M.J. is right you never do release a word in vain. All you need is a few lines to unleash a thousand thoughts. Another gem, glad to be reading you again!
Kevin, your very positive constructive criticism means a great deal to me. Your one of my favourite poets on this site. You concurring with M.J. about my never releasing
cont'd: a word in vain is such a high form of praise for me. True to my mentor's wishes, I strive for meaningful succinctness in my poetry.