Thursday, September 12, 2013

'Aging' Comments

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Often times the pain stings
Left part of the arm it clings
In the middle sternum lingers
Valve of aorta seems calcify
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Elena Sandu 18 September 2013

Great truth spoken dear friend, Birth itself a mark of death Reasons cannot even defy A reality that is destined That life has finite end On earth for all of us Great truth dear friend, your wonderful poem brought again to light my old nightmare: am I this creature of shorten life right to shorten other's lives? Was this my destiny to bring death in the garden of my mother Earth? Thank you for sharing a very interesting poem, I learnt a few things.

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Marvin Brato Sr

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