Alankar(Decor) -67 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Alankar(Decor) -67



Autumnal Sport(Equinox) -Kyrielle sonnet poem

a 14 line poem-3 quatrains and a couplet
syllabic,8 syllables per line.
rhyme scheme AabB ccbB ddbB AB or AbaB cbcB dbdB AB.
composed with a refrain in the last line of each stanza.
L1 is repeated as L13 and L4 is repeated as L8, L12 and L14.
composed with no prescribed pivot however those that I have read usually pivot between the 2nd and 3rd quatrains.


Autumnal Sport(Equinox)

His play has begun and he moves
Knowing of time to play her moves
They are apart in playing mood
Hide and seek in set somewhat good

Azure is hidden, the sun too
Hiding, the passing clouds to do
Clement earth is pleased in good mood
Hide and seek in set somewhat good

Their diction of laughing applause
Flora, fauna drizzle while toss
Them the guiding winds in sound mood
Hide and seek in set somewhat good

His play has begun and he moves
Hide and seek in set somewhat good

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Not an easy poetic task to endeavour in and complete with such impressive results as you did.here! Looks like you have adhered to every format requirement...Kudos, Indira.....I came on back here in mid June...heard that a new management team was in place...So far, not bad...When u get a moment come visit...I have posted some new work, for the 1st time in well over a year....~fJr~

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