A Collapsed House Rebuilt Poem by Indira Renganathan

A Collapsed House Rebuilt

Rating: 4.8


In that top corner of the house
A cobweb swaying in breeze
What made the breeze become the wind
A foul play..it blew butting blind
Chasing the wind now cobweb in a play
It's His mercy the spider back on way
Behold, he is weaving again his house



Note:Thank you PoemHunter for selecting my poem 'A Collapsed House Rebuilt' for the Poem Of The Day..thanks a lot for this honour

Sunday, December 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 29 July 2019

Life always finds a way to express itself- even in unlikeliest of forms. Thanks & Congrats for this poem adjudged POD, Indira Ma'm.

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Very true..Thank you very much Rajnish Manga for your good words

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Jane Campion 29 July 2019

Poe5s with imaginationare the cobweb.

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Thank you Jane for your comment

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Adeeb Alfateh 29 July 2019

What made the breeze become the wind A foul play..it blew butting blind great write great 10++++++++++++++++++

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Preethi Richards 25 August 2022

It's wonderful Ma'am 😍

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punya_the_poetess. 09 August 2021

Wow! What an imagery!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 July 2021

A great poem dear madam! Timeless! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2021

There is a beautiful combination on breeze, wind and cobweb. Visited time and again. Five stars.

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A wonderful poem imbued with insight and wisdom. Hardwork is a great attribute to gain success in life. A clever write with great imagery.

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