House Poems: 100 / 500

A Collapsed House Rebuilt

Rating: 4.8

In that top corner of the house
A cobweb swaying in breeze
What made the breeze become the wind
A foul play..it blew butting blind
Chasing the wind now cobweb in a play
It's His mercy the spider back on way
Behold, he is weaving again his house



Note:Thank you PoemHunter for selecting my poem 'A Collapsed House Rebuilt' for the Poem Of The Day..thanks a lot for this honour

Sunday, December 4, 2016
House Poems: 100 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Dear Indira Ma'm! I am so happy and pleased to see your poem as the POD. Heartiest Congratulations! You highly deserve this honour. A lovely little poem of hope, perseverance and life! What greater example than a spider! A full score of 100 for you dear, dear Poetess!

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Thanks a lot dearest Geeta..I am happy you got it rightly...yes, it is the relentless effort of the tiny spider...thanks again Geeta

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 July 2019

A wonderful little poem on a wonderful little happening. A ray of light may not reach that corner of the house, but the poet's imagination has reached there well. jahan na phonche ravi, vahan phonche kavi.

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Thank you very much Aniruddhaji....yours is indeed a lovely comment...I feel greatly honoured

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 July 2019

An inspiring poetic write, dear Ma’am Indira. Congrats on your selected piece...10+++

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punya_the_poetess. 09 August 2021

Wow! What an imagery!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 July 2021

A great poem dear madam! Timeless! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2021

There is a beautiful combination on breeze, wind and cobweb. Visited time and again. Five stars.

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A wonderful poem imbued with insight and wisdom. Hardwork is a great attribute to gain success in life. A clever write with great imagery.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2020

So brilliantly captured the work of cobweb. Wonderful imagery. Thi poem has a special attraction. Visited time and again.

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