Thursday, May 1, 2014

Alcohol Comments

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My dearest friend
My harshest enemy
My truest thoughts
My impurest morals
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Noah Wright
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Brian Jani 02 May 2014

Nicely written Noah, that is so true about alcohol.please checkout my poems

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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

Lyn summed this piece up perfectly. Alcohol is a drug and lime any other highly addictive. It's a vicious cycle and once started almost impossible to end without the help of others. You wrote a very moving, powerful poem on the drug that has and continues to destroy so many lives.

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Lyn Paul 01 May 2014

Hello Noah, A very moving, honest write stating the highs and lows of alcohol. This affect so many. Sadly in this day everything is socialising with alcohol which can be the beginning to a problem for many and the cost of it is so cheap. Thank you so much for sharing. The Sun will come out tomorrow. x

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