Alive Poem by kaley kodesch

Alive

Rating: 5.0


angry is what i feel
angry is what i want to hide
angry makes me want to die
everyday i become more like u
did you have to make me cry?
did you have to see the blood to stop this lie?
i try to remeber why im alive
but it is bad theres no reason?
is it im not meant to be?
cant i love
cant i live
cant i surive
if i survie your bullshit lies
why do i still want to die?
i want to love with out fear
but u ruin that 2
so when i die, i hope u die 2
cuz i'll be ruling hell
and ill ruin ur forever will,
so ill laugh, n finally feel alive

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 21 October 2011

Impressive! YES, you can love again, YES, you can live without whatever is disturbing you and YES, you definitely will survive! We all go through this difficult stage of our lives and live long enough to talk about and then laugh! So are you, my dear K.K.! This amazing write gives you away! You are young and have a great poetic talent! 10+++ Be strong! Keep inspiring the World with more powerful writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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