lola hi l


All I Want From Life Is To Hold Me - Poem by lola hi l

all i want from life is
to hold me
to console me
to give me what i need
to be my friend indeed
to hold my hand and let me lead
and i will always appreciate life
we are who we are
and it never been life's job
to show you
where to run...
were to end
and what to mend
and i want this life to hold me
To return from the place where we begin
where this life hold us again
but wich road back to take
it never been life's job
to tell
where to come out
where to come in
who's the sinner
and what's the sin
and we will always appreciate life
and we are always appreciating life
and we are masters of our worlds
but all i want from life is to hold me
A cold breeze
as i try to believe
it's getting harder to breathe
and i really need this life to hold me


Comments about All I Want From Life Is To Hold Me by lola hi l

  • Ramesh Rai (11/30/2012 6:03:00 AM)


    I appreciate your poem. a good write. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/8/2011 12:12:00 PM)


    Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 8, 2011


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