Tuesday, February 5, 2008

All Things Wept. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rain fell
like sorrow.

The rain fell
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Dónall Dempsey
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Scarlett Treat 06 February 2008

Laugh, and the world laughs with you...cry, and you cry alone...I love the phrasing of the 'shattered' raindrops. Beautifully sad, this one...painful, yet beautiful.

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Michael Pruchnicki 05 February 2008

Donall, you got a Gaelic way with words! An Irish William Carlos Williams you could be!

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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