Almost A Sonnet Comments

Enjoy now and pay later has been the philosophy of man since the fall of Adam. It's brilliant of you to expound it in simple but beautiful verse.

I adore this - in particular the last verse. Great image and one to which so many of us can relate, I think.

I really like this sonnet, Max. It's almost what I'm trying to do with my broadcast series. Write meter that sounds like free verse when you read it.