Almost One Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Almost One

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“What is going on in your mind”?
She came near and almost reminded
I was dreaming day time in her memory
Even though we loved already

She will keep me waiting
Till the sun was preparing
To go down in west
As if my passion was put to test

She may emerge all of sudden
With sweet smile and jokes even
That will melt me like a ice
As I was committed to her with promise

We almost met daily
And exchanged happily
There was no room for any doubt
We discussed almost everything or talked about

Sometimes it used to send me off the road
As I may slip off to think of future load
She may assure me with confidence
And advise promptly to live in her presence

I felt lucky relieved
As I took her word and believed
She was very much firm and bold
We were almost one and everything was told

Saturday, April 12, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

welcome mericel remirez and shujat ahmed 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

NICE. paul naragon4 hours ago THANKS FOR SHARING

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi likes this. Lisa Lombardi I never was open, as inward is the way for us to go. Last line, ur style. Nicely done! ! ! ! 52 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

“What is going on in your mind”? She came near and almost reminded

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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