I stand tall, naked
limbs extended to the sun
proudly, I reach for the sky
fragmented clouds encircle
rooted, I sway to a breeze
a gentle dance with autumn
Thinly, I shiver
as below me they gather
the pool of leaves
that have forsaken me.
ah, YES...autumn.....Beautiful for us...Tough time for the trees....Even Rogaine Can't reverse th' loss....Great metaphoric gem... ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F j R}
Nice fall image... That's what I see everytime I go out in my backyard (and shiver everytime I see the leaves)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deb, I like your poems and the way you describe your thoughts in them. Your poem 'Alone' is simple with a great message. Reminds me of my poem 'The Leaf' Keep them coming!